First, the reason why the environment should be prioritized over the economy is a healthy environment is linked to a healthy economy. According to EPA, determined that for every $1 the US spent on cleaning up the environment, it would save about $5 from reduced health care costs, reduced property damage, reduced damage to crops, and increased worker productivity, This phenomenon can contribute to economic growth as individuals earn more and countries spend less. Also, According to the World Bank, air pollution costs the global economy trillions of dollars each year. This is because the process of treating air pollution requires removing carbon dioxide and hiring people to run pollution treatment units. The bottom line, protecting the environment actually saves money and improves the economy. The problem with understanding this is that benefits are distributed to each individual and are not easy to see, but they are there, whereas costs are easy to see in government or corporate spending. For example, polluting factories and fossil fuel companies and automakers each see direct costs that they can directly measure in dollars. Thus, the costs of cleaning up pollution are more visible than the costs of pollution. This means that the economic gains are millions of individuals paying lower medical bills, thousands of farmers having slightly better yields, millions of employees paying less sick leave, etc. It is hard to see that, and individuals do not usually agree based on benefits they do not directly see.
The second reason the environment should be prioritized over the economy is that prioritizing environmental protection will create new jobs in long-lived industries. Retrofitting homes, alternative energy, and sustainable urban planning are just a few of the emerging industries whose demand extends far into the future. According to Euronews, Someone will make and sell air pollution control technology for power plants and cars. Someone builds sewage and water treatment facilities. Someone will make money from solar cells and wind power, and even bigger jobs will be created by those who invent the 1,000-mile, high-capacity batteries that will one-day power electric cars.
Finally, the reason the environment should be prioritized over the economy is that the environment helps economic growth. Some things people want are free, like air, walking, and for some people, water. Most important things, like water, food, and shelter in cities that people pay for through the economic system, rely on natural resources, i.e. primary production. The limits of primary production are largely dependent on the environment. Without the basics, there is no use in advanced economic systems like entertainment and luxury goods. A key aspect of considering the importance of the environment is that in the short term, People can cope with degradation levels without affecting our economic systems, but in the long term, this is not the case. The economy depends on the environment, but in the long term, to sustain billions of people on the planet, People can have both and there is no reason to have neither because the real economy is not against the environment.
There is a study a while ago
답글삭제(You have to tell the readers all about the study. Who conducted the study? When? Where did you find this study? What was the study on? What were the results of the study?)
determined that for every $1 the US spent on cleaning up the environment, it would save about $5 from reduced health care costs, reduced property damage, reduced damage to crops, increased worker productivity,
(The evidence should explain "how" protecting the environment reduces costs in other aspects of the economy.)
Also, According to World Bank, air pollution costs the global economy Trillions Annually.
(Why? You need to explain in your own words.)
The problem with understanding this is that the benefits are spread out, while the costs are localized.
(You need to explain what this means in your own words or by giving examples.)
It is hard to see that, and individuals do not usually vote based on benefits they do not directly see.
(vote??? vote for what?)
On the other hand, polluting factories and fossil fuel companies and automakers each see direct costs that they can directly measure in dollars. Thus, the costs of cleaning up pollution are more visible than the costs of pollution.
(Again, where did you get this information and it needs to be better explained.)
. Someone will make and sell air pollution control technology for power plants and cars. Someone builds sewage and water treatment facilities. Someone will make money from solar cells and wind power, and even bigger jobs will be created by those who invent the 1,000-mile, high-capacity batteries that will one day power electric cars.
답글삭제(This just seems like a hypothetical situation you made up if you don't cite the source of where you got this information. This information should come from an expert.)
Finally, the reason the environment should be prioritized over the economy is that the environment is essential and the economy is not.
(This is basically a rephrase of your thesis, not a reason.)
"Environment" refers to the air, water, forests, and animals that exist naturally to sustain human life. "Economy" refers to the system in which items are manufactured and distributed based on people's needs and desires.
(you should not be defining terms in the confirmation.)
Some things people want are free, like air, walking, and for some people, water. Most important things, like water, food, and shelter in cities that people pay for through the economic system, rely on natural resources, i.e. primary production. The limits of primary production are largely dependent on the environment. Without the basics, there is no point in advanced economic systems like entertainment and luxury goods.
(This is just your opinion. You need to find evidence to support this fact such as statistics that show majority of people prefer living in a more natural environment rather than enjoying technological advancements such as using cellphones, etc.)
we can cope with degradation levels without affecting our economic systems, but in the long term, this is not the case.
(Don't use "we". Again, this is only your opinion and without evidence, you can't persuade the readers.)