Thesis : South Korea shouldn't give up ownership of the South Korea-Japan Joint Development Zone(Block VII mining area)
http://www.keei.re.kr/main.nsf/index_en.html?open&p=%2Fweb_keei%2Fen_news.nsf%2Fxmlmain%2FC83EEC39289DCD95C9256C230004EF08&s=%3FOpenDocument%26menucode%3DES90
https://thediplomat.com/2023/02/keep-an-eye-on-the-japan-korea-joint-development-zone/
https://www.newsdirectory3.com/sector-7-make-it-louder-interview-by-kbs-reporter-hong-sa-hoon/
https://www.jiia-jic.jp/en/japanreview/pdf/JapanReview_Vol3_No2_04_Sakai.pdf
You need to rephrase your thesis to, "South Korea should (continue/discontinue) the agreement of the Japna-Korea Joint Development Zone."
답글삭제Your sources are good for the essay.